Squll2's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[U Make Me Feel So Alive [7000]]

Random but cool =D

Not really my style of music, but hey it was chillaxed and I found it pretty funkey, though those vocals did get a bit on my nerves, I really don't know what to say, its pretty repetitive and a bit bland but I really don't know how you can changes those two aspects successfully, sorry, thats why you missed out on those last two stars (=

Sirhc7000 responds:

k, thx.

[Rudy P. - Fun with Poizone]

The BASS!

That Bass is just TOTAL kickass

but as said below me the drums are a bit dry after awhile and it also gets a bit repetative, but I guess all songs are repetitve, these two combined ropped you of your last star (=

PS: Thanks again for the recent help on my topic in the audio forum (=

Fuiste responds:

No problem, I'm always glad to help, and thanks for taking the time to review my song.

Peace.

[Hard Dance 4 [preview]]

Repetitive.. but good!

I agree with the person below me about the long intro, it doesnt really get kicking until 1:25, the only thing that really kept me listening was the guy below me saying that it got good, so yea if you could shorten the intro or add something interesting like a faded synth in the background it would be great!

After 1:25 ish though its amazing! I love it! Keep up the good work (=

['Phosphorescence']

Cooool :P

WoW That was awesome! What Program do you use to make your music? ( Those synth effects the start were just PERFECT )

You missed out on 1 mark because those pianos did just not sound right to me with the synths, mabye if you could tone them down a bit (volume wise) or give them a slight flanger effect to mix in more with the synths (They stuck out especially at the start)

tobycreed responds:

Thanks for the review.

Regarding the piano though. Maybe it's because it was originally much worse than it is now, but I did indeed soften it a bit with some flangus to a point where I thought it contrasted nicely with the synths. Thats probably jsut personal taste though.

And this is FL Studio 6

[Moonlight (Club Mix)]

Wow

WoW when you turn it up thats a funny sensation, love it man dont got any pointers I can give you, though there are probably some that have averted my gaze!

Gonna still have to give you a 10 (=

A-New-Decade responds:

Thanks dude.

_matt

[Chaos pt.1 (remastered!)]

Woaaahh

Woahhhh, your really talented man! I heard something about you writing this first on the demo? Is this only your first submissions/songs? If so, keep going you could be reallllly talented!

You only missed out on the last star because of a few weird transitions here or there - specially the one at the start from the soft slow music to the hard drum beats, and also around 2:30-3 i found there was a few odd notes.

HarvestThrone responds:

Thanks! Uhh, well no lol. I've submitted several tracks, some generating success, others not so much : / But yeah. I've been kind of in a weird toss between writing industrial music, and writing metal. I originally wrote this one on the demo yeah. It's posted on here actually if you want to compare. Titled Chaos pt. 1: Sea of Destruction.
I understand what you're saying about the transitions. It's mainly due to the instruments I chose I think (I'm most likely going to take the Digi synth in the background out in the section you mentioned. I wanted something to kind of build up, but I see it's not working), but I know there are parts that could definitely be worked on more. The drum transition from the slow to the heavier section is definitely one of those.
Thanks again man!